打油詩

只有唇語可以解除唇語
只有cd可以交換cd
只有奧義可以到達另一個奧義
但是我忽略停止panic的重要性
以及等待使意志堅定
以及愛使黑暗發光
除了建議一起惡作一個劇
我沒有其他更壞的主意
你正摸索前行
我正崎嶇

#ref

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4 Comments

  1. Posted November 26, 2006 at 5:17 pm | Permalink

    對了,那兩句「以及…以及…」的音樂性,讓我想到,跟 e. e cumming 的這首詩,竟有一種神奇的對位:

    as freedom is a breakfastfood
    or truth can live with right and wrong
    or molehills are from mountains made
    -long enough and just so long
    will being pay the rent of seem
    and genius please the talentgang
    and water most encourage flame

    Full text can be found here: http://plagiarist.com/poetry/249/

  2. acer
    Posted November 27, 2006 at 7:03 pm | Permalink

    i heart e.e. cummings. he is one of my favorite poets. what’s up with this pipe thing with you?

  3. LooKing
    Posted November 27, 2006 at 10:27 pm | Permalink

    在我找到新名字以前,你可以叫我爱情,玫瑰花即使换了一个名字还是一样的芬芳~

  4. Posted January 28, 2008 at 8:47 am | Permalink

    有趣的打油詩,
    我也發現很多cummings跟夏宇的節奏,
    我歸諸那些瀟灑的忘卻節奏,
    請多指教。

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